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Format: translation-review
The package contains a machine-translated DRAFT excerpt of content destined for publication, and names the target language. Review it as a native speaker.
Rules (as stated in every package):
- Correct the draft; do not rewrite it into your own text.
- Flag anything culturally off or unintentionally funny/offensive.
- Do not add content. Do not translate beyond the excerpt.
Validate before sending:
python3 validate.py translation-review your-deliverable.txt
Deliverable format
First line: the task reference from your package. Then:
Overall: PUBLISHABLE AS-IS | PUBLISHABLE WITH FIXES | NEEDS RETRANSLATION
Fixes (one per line):
<line/segment reference>: <original> -> <your correction> — <why, briefly>
Tone note: <2-3 sentences on register/naturalness for this audience>
Example (FICTIONAL draft and fixes)
TASK-REFERENCE-FROM-YOUR-PACKAGE
Overall: PUBLISHABLE WITH FIXES
Fixes (one per line):
line 2: "relaxing sound bath" -> "soothing sound journey" — literal rendering reads clinical in this register
line 5: "press start for calm" -> "begin whenever you are ready" — imperative feels abrupt to native ears
line 9: "deep rest state" -> "state of deep rest" — word order
Tone note: The draft is understandable throughout but leans formal for a
wellbeing audience; the fixes soften it to the conversational register native
speakers expect from this kind of product copy.
